The criteria we had to use to write and present our speech included, an introduction, delivery, content and our conclusion.
1. I am learning to do some powerful writing and doing a specific writing as well.
2. I am learning to do a introduction in the beginning.
I think my introduction was kind of good but it wasn't in order and some of it didn't make any sense.
I think I should of checked my work before I had read it out and I should of read it to see if it made sense and that it was in order.
I think that my voice was good but my speech didn't have enough information.
I think I have to change my sentences and add more information to make it great for the audience that want to read it. I think that they will like it now because I changed some of the things that I did wrong in my speech.
In conclusion think my voice was kind of great but I needed to speak a bit louder and add more information.
