My best Hobby every is swimming

My favourite thing to do is swimming because I like to swim everywhere in the pool instead of swimming in one place.Swimming is one of my thing to do.

I like swimming in massive pools so I can swim from length to length. Or how ever I want. I only love swimming when I am very hot and on a sunny day.

In the pools I like to do some bombs in the pool because it splashes everywhere and its fun. I also like splashing because contains some jumping. But mostly I like to do all sort of things that got to do with swimming

Every time I hear swimming I say can we go to the pool because it too hot to stay at home. And we have nothing to do but all we do is rather watch TV or talk to each other.

In the pools I love to run because the water follows me and the directions i’m going. But when I run its kind of tiring, because the water is too hard to run in.

In the swimming pools I like to dive under the water because when you go under the water it looks like that you are going right down to the bottom of the pools, you might hit your self if you dive too hard, and might leave a bruise on. your body.

The pools on the bottom where you stand on its made of concrete so the water won’t sink down.

Mothers day

My dream for new zealand

What happened at the hall it was sososo boring

At the hall we were talking about what was going to happened at the Glen Innes centre and we were talking about we is it going to be.

  At the hall some class's  came and they were Room 11 and then Room12 came as well and we had to get a paper and write what you want in glen inners and what you want to do.


At the hall it was so excited because we went to the hall because they were so amazing and Britney said to them thank you for coming and I wish that they can come back and talk bout that again.

At the hall everyone at the hall had to pick one person to call out what we had on the piece of paper and we had everything we wanted in the glen inners centre and we all went back to class and we were talking about it during class time.

And at the hall we all had to cross out what the person calls out you have to cross it out because others might have the same as all other groups.

At the big hall we had to go to a table because we were going to write their own words that they want to write on the piece of paper and I was so angry because Alexa would move over because she didn't want to sit next to Jelsma so she just sat there and didn't write anything on the paper and I said to her to grab the pen and write something on that piece of paper.

Soup for us

Today 30th of August 2012 the whole school went to the hall for a healthy lunch and the whole school got to make their own sandwich  and I was laughing because my friend Kaz had now butter on her bread. She said to me that it not funny she told me that miss pat gave her two bread and she showed me that she had one with no butter on it.

I said why don't  you got one with  butter she told miss Barry and she just said well it not my problem it the teachers  who made the food and Room nine stole our ham and Sameera  group were called  the dog,Kaz and I were laughing out loud and tupou said why do I have to laugh when I eat with food in my mouth and I was eat my healthy sandwich.

 We had to cute cuber,cheese,carrot, and ham for our healthy lunch and when we had lunch the bell had rang when we were still eating and all the class's went back to class because Mr Hendricks  said to them that they can go back to class but our class and room 11 had to clean the hall and my class were gone and some had still been in the hall to clean and I was trying to do the thing and Samara's said to me don't touch it because Mr Naidoo was coming to do it. And I just went outside and went to class because she was just trying to tell me what to do in the hall.

 I know that she trying to tell me the right thing but I didn't like it when she talked to me like that I said why and I said why and  I just came down the stair and I felt that she was beaning mean because she told me not to touch it at all. And I said OK I will just go outside and leave  use along and do your job in the hall.

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Speech about the Olympic I was EXCITING.???

We have been learning to write and present our speeches. We had to persuade the audience to think our way. The Olympics was our theme.
The criteria we had to use to write and present our speech included, an introduction, delivery, content and our conclusion.

1. I am learning  to do some powerful writing and doing  a specific  writing as well.
2. I am learning to do a introduction in the beginning.

I think my introduction was kind of good but it wasn't in order and some of it didn't make any sense.

I think I should of checked my work before I had read it out and I should of read it to see if it  made sense and that it was in order.

I think that my voice was good but my speech didn't have enough information.

I think I have to change my sentences and add more information to make it great for the audience that want to read it.  I think that they will like it now because I changed some of the things that I did wrong in my speech.
In conclusion  think my voice was kind of great but I needed to speak a bit louder  and add more information.